SILVERY RADIANT SONG
Suppose we start with what’s right in
front of us
Piles of books and a blue thermos full of
water
How can we reach from this to a
medieval ship on the high seas full of
levitating saints whose vestments
flap like clouds
or salt flats from the wastes of
Africa where the sea once stood
on all fours like a lowing animal
but sank into the sand at last
leaving only its crystally salt skin behind?
Or how to reach from this place to
a simultaneous multiplicity of places
each with its particular
flag and its own coral lagoon
with soft music wafting through swaying
palm trees?
How do we get from where we
are to where we aren’t?
From our circumscribed mortal being to
full flight before God’s endlessly
Beneficent Face beyond all clouds and
hills all conflagrations and sweet
resolutions of both conflict and
harmony where only choirs inside
grassblades clods and eyelashes can be
heard ascending scales of
jubilant praise?
Our mortality can’t define us
but our divine contract can
whose heartbeats constantly sign on the
dotted line before His Majesty
at the beginning not only of our own
short lives but also at the beginning point of the
earliest millennia of shade and
light across earth’s billowing waters
where levitating saints whose vestments
flap like clouds float now on waves of
silvery radiant song
2/27/2008 (from The Fire Eater’s Lunchbreak, in progress)
Daniel,Daniel
you wake me from dulled complacency, blessings
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Daniel – السلام عليكم
What a pleasant piece of prose to wake up to. You truly have the gift my friend. I look forward to more. My Allah continue to expand your breast.
– M
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Awesome mashaAllah! I never read such beautiful poetry before. I am a poet myself; just starting writing poetry like 2-3 years ago as a hobby…
Coming back to your poem here, I liked the transition from “reaching places like Africa, lagoons” to “reaching God”. It was abrupt but the connections intended were made quite smoothly although I feel there was something missing here.
How do we get from where we
are to where we aren’t?
From our circumscribed mortal being to
full flight before God’s endlessly
Can’t point out what exactly it is thought but something….
I still have to digest the ending a bit…If I had anything worthwhile to contribute after fully understanding this piece, I will post a comment here inshaAllah.
Keep it up inshaAllah.
take care
Assalam-u-alaikum
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it is wonderful daniel make more please
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it is wonderful may God bless you do more and you will be famous among the ARABS (MUSLIMS)
from your number 1 fan
Omar Ehab the son of Iman EL-SHAHIDI
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